Great poem 5/5!!! hugs

Another great poem I hope u will keep writing!

I think that describes a crush very well, I really liked it. Keep on writing,
Satuxxa

that's a really sweet poem. keep writing. :)

xxx

Great crush discription, well done

It's okay. It lacked emotions

I looked at him playfully and said well see

the 'well see' part does not make sense to me is all.

Hehe...thats cute. I like this : )

Wow i love this poem it rhymes naturally. . .Maybe that "well" should be "We'll" which is how i read it. . and it made sense. . .

good job

laura
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