sad...but lovely...great rhyming...i like it.

xxx

I have been there myself! Great emotion throughout! You could feel the pain as you read the poem! ~Brooke~

But love wasn’t on the list
Other girls was who you chose to kiss

love that..i really liekt his ..great flow and just really easy to read ..5/5

Not as good as your other poem. You could work on the flow

Good poem. You misspelled throw though.

Awwe. I love this poem. It's very good...I can relate! You're a great writer.!!

Very nice.. Yeah, I would never do anything to hurt a woman, and I cease to see why people do this crap.. Love it. =)

--James~

Hmm, i am not a fan of every line rhyming. howevre, most of your rhymes sounded unforced and went smoothly

Ruby

To me, some of the rhymes seemed forced, but overall the poem itself is really good. great write. 5/5

marcella