I love him

by Amanda   Mar 18, 2005


I call out your name, to see if you are here,
cause i had a nightmare, shaking full of fear,
I want you to hold me, to be here by my side,
and to apologise, for every time you've lied,

stop trying hard to score, for your mates to see,
want you to show and feel, some respect for me,
stop acting so cocky, to show that you are big,
cos grow up honey, you're acting like a kid,

I do love you so much, but until you do mature,
I am afraid to you, I'll have to show the door,
I don't want to have to, i really really care,
if you decide to grow up, i will be right there.

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

Just a short one for this lad i like so much.
comments would be really appreciated. Thanks :)

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  • 19 years ago

    by newlun

    very well written

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Isabel

    I understand, some guys are funny that way. Don't ever give something up unless you get respesct from the other person. Do what makes you happy. :) By the way, thanks for your comment on my poem "Pretended Friends" ...

    -Izzy

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent poem, Amanda. Beautiful and very well written.

    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

    Love, Amit

  • 19 years ago

    by *~*Soldier Lover*~*

    wow....I'm so sorry the guy you love is like that, I hope everything works out for you!
    *~*Soldier Lover*~*