flawless flow skillful write honest emotion as for the content
maybe you should not loose hope just yet about the reply.. may God bless you

hey this is reli gud, i love the line , sitting alone upon my grave, an xcellent poem worthy of a 5 well dun xxx

Short but still it was well written. The rhyme skim is really good. It flows very well. Great work!!!5/5=)

Can u plz comment on my new poem tilted My Story Part II thanks!!!=)

yes but one thing. it is suppose to be short. it is a sonnet. :)

this poem was amazing. 5/5

It is great.

even though this is sad it is still so beautiful...I dont know how you do it.

this poems very sad...very deep....definatly a 5/5 nd i hav no advise to give i found it flawless

that was very good

Angels ignore me and god wont reply
I love that part so much! great poem once again, amazing and it just blew me away...keep writing!

excellent 5/5

Amazing piece! It's honest and portrays the despair and tragedy within life! It's not your basic run of the mill "I hate my life cause it sucks" poem! You have a fascinating way with words! I usually pick out my favorite lines within a poem, but there are just too many in this one! Keep it up~Holly

Amazing piece! It's honest and portrays the despair and tragedy within life! It's not your basic run of the mill "I hate my life cause it sucks" poem! You have a fascinating way with words! I usually pick out my favorite lines within a poem, but there are just too many in this one! Keep it up~Holly