thankyou emily and perla for ur comments :)

wow great poem Hussain! 5/5
please check out my poem "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever" and please comment and vote it would mean a lot. Hugs

wow, that was another brilliant poem, very well done 5/5

at first the rhyming sounded forced......but through the poem it just gets better, I really thought this was incredibly sweet!! -5
*~*Soldier Lover*~*

This is an awesome as poem you have heaps of talent, thanks for commenting on my work.

wow great poem I loved it 1/10

lol danial 1/10. very funny

Very good poem, you have talent. Thanks for checking out my stuff :)

5/5
this is very good when i get a chance i'll read your others

A very sweet poem, written from the heart! Check out mine if you have time! Keep up the good work!

awww good poem! thanks for ur comment!
take care
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U can tell it came from your heart and i like poems like that! 5! :)

5/5 I realy enjoyed this poem

this one is pretty good, some of the lines seem a bit too long and forced though. I would still rate it a 4/5 though. Keep up the good work.

ha ha....I love the humor in this poem...."Trust me when I say it’s not my lightest touch
I have never made an angel blush before" was my fav. part. 5/5

loved it! another five!

lol oui I love this one, a job well done, it was such a joy to read and brought a smile to my face. 5/5

This one seems a bit different form the rest of yours...in a good way though! It's not that it sounds more sophisticated, but the language is really well used well done x

Awww.. what a sweet poem, you seem such the romantic! :D