Here I Am

by Just Lucy   Mar 20, 2005


Here I am, sitting alone
in a shed of silence,
Here I am, tears running down my cheeks
head thumping and heart pumping
I've got everyone but no one
I've got feelings but none are good,
I'm a failure at school and at home,
Here I am with nothing left accept a road, with no end,
Here I am, all alone, thinking of what life could be, here I am on the phone, calling a helpline that just doesn't help,
Here I am when i wish i wasn't
Here I am waiting, for something that will never come!
Here I am, dying as a lost cause in the desert sun, Here I am, finding my way through a big empty world,
Here I am

*Please comment, i would love to know what is wrong with it if you don't like it or what you would change in it*
*PLEASE :)*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    thank u sarah, i'm feeling much better now, ur comment really means alot to me :)

    *~!Lucy!~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Thank you, i will read you peoms now, I'm getting there, but thank you for your comment it means alot to me :)

    *~!Lucy!~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Pianist

    Oh I'm sorry! I feel what you feel, and I'm here too. I hope you are ok! Read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    thank you Caitlin that means alot to me thank you so much :)

    *~Lucy~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Caitlin

    there is nothing wrong with it...u get a 5/5 from me...i really liked it
    Caitlin