Hey Girl, I miss ya so much, you gotta email me soon .. lol .. I love hearin from ya and I started writin u a poem in thanks of all you do for me lol .. you truly have made me a better writter .. Ur AWESOME !! lol .. but yeah neway I loved this poem, It was gr8, a truly well written poem, way to go wit this one ! .. lol.. love ya girl !
- Britt/May -

Hey Girl, I miss ya so much, you gotta email me soon .. lol .. I love hearin from ya and I started writin u a poem in thanks of all you do for me lol .. you truly have made me a better writter .. Ur AWESOME !! lol .. but yeah neway I loved this poem, It was gr8, a truly well written poem, way to go wit this one ! .. lol.. love ya girl !
- Britt/May -

I like it, it is mysteriuos

i like it...it was a poem that made you wonder but at the same time was awesome! hey im back! keep in touch
lexi lou

Thanks for everyone who stopped to comment! This piece is based on a bizarre memory of a dream I had, back home in the islands, it still kinda haunts my memory to this day - just eerie....:o)

Brill 5 :)

gave it a 5 just for the awesome creativity!!

With love,
Heather

mysterious, powerful, andbeautiful poem!!! that poem was awsome, it really left me thinking... good job on the poem hun
stay strong always...

sorry Kelly...I care not to explain it as I not "understood" you...LMAO :OP

Donald - thankyou! I appreciate comments from an artist such as yourself

Amy - your too kind thanking you also :O)

Whoa.. beautiful as ever! I have missed reading your poetry. I cleared my favorites out a few weesk ago, but I'm adding you back! lol. Take care! <3

wow a short but really well written mysterious poem....very thought provoking i like the mystrey behind it ..made me think too.
5/5 beauty of poetry :)

I have no idea what the meaning of this poem is or who Lahana is, but it left shivers going up my back. It's so eerie and mysteriously beautiful all at the same time. Fantastic poem!

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy