this was good.....very very very very good......going straight to my faves!!!

wow this is truly amazing it really makes u feel for the girl. 5/5 xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

omg i love this poem! its so deep and sad...:'( its the best poem ive read so far, by far!

100%!! 5/5 PeaCe. LoVe. PrOsPeRItY

Wow just wow. That poem was excellent. Its very moving and powerful. One of the best poems ive read on this site. Keep up the great work!
Take care,
Rachelxx

awww this is realy good:) sad story:(

so sad:'(

hey well done this is great! it does happen lots out there and you showed it realli well!! if u have time check out some of mine and comment/vote it means alot thanks
loz x x

WoW!! nice poem it seems like i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level of writing.

plz read some of my poems and give me some comment to be better coz i need some advices.

Wow this was very sad but its so true a lot of people who get extreamly picked on like that keep it bottled up cause they think its their fault, they think they deserved it, or they dont know what to say. this was a wonderful poem extreamly say thought. Take care and keep it up I really liked this one especially how u described the tear stained pages.

Really amazing poem,

good work, keep going.

xXx

1 word, wow.

That explains lots, i have a book to and the poem helped me realise some things. very well done, i liked it.

5/5!

~Excellent!!

Check out my poems if you get a chance.. thanks!

-Usher

Shit that was amazing!!!!!!!!

Wow this is deep! it is like im speachless!!! nice job keep it up!!!20/10

Excellent peom. great writing

OMG! THIS WAS THE BEST POEM IVE EVER READ!!! I LUV LUV LUV THIS! wow....i am so amazed...it sound so much like me...except...i am not dead...anyawy...wow....5/5 4 SURE!!!

~*Who Cares?*~

Loved it! Very sad, but so well written!
Keep it up!

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

This poem is amazin its really good you got alot of talent well done (i hope the girl your talking about really is'nt you )

Oooo, that it really sad. i just wana say you wrote that reallly well am really sorry. god bless * xxxx