wonderful writing!

I enjoyed this very much

You express anger at other people who put you down, which is fair, but then some of your meaning is lost when you degrade those people for their beliefs aswell. E.G...
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"Some religions worship magic, others worship science.
Some believe they’re evolving into gods themselves.
And then these same people have the nerve to chastise me."
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Unfortunately the impact of this piece is lost because of this.

This is simply great! A fantastic message, I can really relate! A beautiful write, really!