First loves whisper

by Donna   Mar 22, 2005


It was the first time she had ever been kissed.

The lighting was right

It was true bliss

Then it was over just as quick as it came

Was it real

Was he playing games

Then he spoke and touched her face

Life was good ,no it was great

He told her how much he loved her how much he cared

The moonbeams shinning bright floating in the air

Nothing could go wrong

If it did she didn\'t care

He started kissing her neck

Down to her chest

He held her close

Not ever wanting rest

Then the time came

She had to leave

Nothing was finished

None of their needs

Their love was undying

No matter the cons

They will make it through

The beginning had just begun

This was first loves whisper

Telling them to hold on

Not to give up

To always be strong

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  • 19 years ago

    by David Paul

    It had a good story but it kinda had a shape to it. the poem itself started with small sentences and got bigger than got small again. If you can, try to make them more even. It makes it a little easier to read. Other that that you got yourself a really good poem. keep up the awsome work.

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