Aching Ocean

by LoÑ£ly♥P!rÄτΣ   Mar 23, 2005


The roaring ocean,
shows so much devotion,
the changing tides,
all have their time.
The hot shiny sand,
is where couples hold hands,
but who is a lover for the ocean?
does anyone want its devotion?
No, because no one cares,
no one brave enough to dare,
to show their love.
They stay silent as a dove.
The lonely ocean,
with unnoticed devotion,
cant drown his sorrow,
so he waits for tomorrow.

Kinda a weird thing to write about...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    Weird? I think not, my friend! lol... Great poem, again!
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    very nice poem!

    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love.

    Love, Amit ~

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