The Red Rain Drops

by Maz   Mar 23, 2005


~ The Red Rain Drops ~

The little red rain drops, begin to cascade,
With each tiny droplet, my pain seems to fade,
The rain, it occurs, each day without fail,
Because without it, my past would prevail.

The rain I cry for, I crave all it holds,
I’ll wait for the signs, as my hurt unfolds,
I cant take the pressure, I give in once more,
And I feel the red raindrops, fall to the floor.

The drops become constant, just like a monsoon,
But no one hears the storm, as Im locked in my room,
The rain becomes heavy, it all starts to pour,
Im laying alone, bleeding, on my bedroom floor.

I see no escape, no where to hide from the rain,
Because even with its release, I still feel insane,
Soaked in my pain, but a smile on my face,
The rainfall has freed me, my hurt has erased.

I wipe up the spills, with peace in my mind,
But I know that the rain will fall one more time,
Tomorrow the cloud will cover my soul,
And again, I will feel the need of control.

Drenched in my ‘happiness’, I knew it was clear,
That the rain would fall, just as Id feared,
I cant help but feel that its all for the best,
As the little red rain drops, stop me feeling’ depressed.

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    This is a very touching poem, hun. I have no idea as to what your past could possibly be, and of the pain you feel each day, but I hope you make it through.

    Megan

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Wow, impressive. Nice work. >3jess

  • 19 years ago

    by elizabeth

    This is one of the best poems i have read. It is so deep and portrays your emotions so well. You should definately kerp writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Wow excellent poem. The first verse was especially good. You must be very talented to write such a moving poem! I give you a five.
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kiersten Nicole

    damn, i love it! its great, awesome! i really liked it a lot because it touched me.. i can DEFINETLY relate.. two thumbs up for an awesome poem!
    -K