Comments : Once Upon A Time....

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    this is atruely rtouching poem, very very emotional, 5/5 good writing, keep uip the awesome work k
    xoxo
    *~#LuCy#~*

  • 19 years ago

    by Cantchangeme

    Hey, first of all thank you for commenting on my poem it means a lot, I loved this poem it told a very sad yet brilliantly told storey, easily gets a 5 im suprised more people havnt voted commented on this

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    I didn't understand this. But it's not your fault. I just had an immense concentration on the picture you were painting; vivid. I noted your use of words, not the story line. It was written with superb grace. The imagery at the start made me smile, and by the end, I had a frown. You need not to of understood this to know how brilliant this is.

    And if you don't get my ramblings; I am just merely stating that this piece is very well written.

  • 19 years ago

    by Noelle k.

    awesome poem. i love it 5

  • 18 years ago

    by TrUtH hUrTs

    hmm i liked the way the whole thing came together an dall the elements were woven into eachother and the flow of emotion was extremely beautiful..kudos
    p.s plzz read some of my stuff

  • Brilliant! So imaginative and capturing. So different to most poems, I loved it
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex

    This is unlike any poem i have ever read. Well Done!! keep up the work. 5/5 from me.
    ~@L€X~

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I don't know what it is about this poem, but it's magical. I mean, not happy-magical but yeah.

    Sorry, I'm not good at explaining, so I'll just say this is a good poem. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowedPhoenix

    I like it but i did find it a little confusing(You could probably put that down to me being blonde,lol) but it was good. There was a spelling error though that you might want to fix 'lyes' is 'lies'

    Then also there's something bout your very first verse that feels out of place, not specifically the words but more the style because everyother verse has 4 lines and that has 5, so you might wanna work on that a little bit.

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    hey.....it was a really good poem...you have a talent ......it kind of confused me but i just get confused a lot lol...5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    class poem!!! i reallly enjoyed reading it!!! great poem!!! x)

  • 18 years ago

    by AJ

    hey, pretty good. keep it up. 5/5

    ~no more

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    You can feel your emotion coming from the poem. It is very unike. I have never seen a poem quite like this one. Good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by SHYSTY23KO

    Its such a cute poem! I really like it, you usued good words and it painted a picture in my head. Its so cute! You did a great job definatly for this being your first time with this style, you should try some more!