Saving Angel

by Lost but Smiling   Mar 24, 2005


Hello? Is that you,
my Saving Angel?
Is that you I see?
Are you real?
Or are you lost, just like me?
Tell me my angel,
if you are not a mirage,
Am I going insane?
Am I still me now, my Angel?

I used to know
exactly who i was,
but now my self-perception
is slowly being eaten away.
I feel so alone, and so confused.
My Saving Angel, please don't confirm what I already know.

I know that i am a spine-less coward.
Who cannot really stand up,
for what she believes.
So my Saving Angel,
I turned to you,
and yet I am still confused.

Perhaps I was wrong,
maybe you are not the last
bit of my sanity.
Maybe you really are a mirage.
So my Saving Angel,
are you really going to save me?
Or are you just going to let me be?
Are you going to let me seep,
in the self despair?

Please, My Saving Angel,
If you are really there,
hear my plea
and save me!

*This is another crappy poem by yours truly. This is also another poem i based off of a picture that I drew. It's actually a really cool picture, but that's besides the point...but because i like the picture so much, this one actually is gonna be Copyrighted.*

(C) Descendant of Darkness

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    no i really love this poem you did a great job with it. wish i could see the picture sounds like a good one. i too have a couple of angel poems and i drew pictures to them too! love your "Lost but Smiling" thats a real cool name. keep up the good work!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by Lia Jnell

    wow, that was a really good poem. it seems lyke u dont have much self confidence, if so, u shouldnt. ur poems are amazing, which should reveal that you are too. obviously i dont know you, but u sound lyke a really great person. keep up the fantastic work.
    lia jnell

  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    i dont think this is crappy at all, i think it is amazing, and i can relate to it so much......keep up the great work =) ~hugs~

    -brittnay- ((5/5))

  • 19 years ago

    by Lost but Smiling

    mint? that's a new one, i like that phrase, lol! ty hun!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amba

    heya , that was yet again another amazing poem, ur style is totali mint!!!
    kep it up
    lots of love bam 5 out of 5