Comments : Follow the river

  • 19 years ago

    by SavannahSurrender

    hehe i like it... just goin with the flow.... its peace full and i really like it good job keep it up and take a look at mine!

    much love
    savannah

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    Firstly I'd like to say: well done with advertising yourself. Your comment amount has been increasing every time I go into your profile. I myself have a very small amount of comments (for 45 poems),I should've started when I was new.

    Ok, now onto the reason I leave comments... your poem.
    I like it. The rhyming scheme of it was well done; didn't seem forced in my opinion. Your wording choice was well done, keep following that river, whether it be to happiness or adventure...
    "I´m just a girl who lover and goes with the flow. "
    That's the only line that I had a problem with. I think "lover" is not the right word... should it be "loves"?
    Well done!

  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    that was really good.. i enjoyed reading it... keep it up!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    short but a very good poem... I voted a 5 for this one =)

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    great poem! n thnaks for ur comments! i especially like the line ...Like the leaves of the trees, made out of glass...well done keep writing!
    xxxLoUxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by D..

    this is fantastic ..loved it 5/5
    Doreen

  • 19 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    wow for a short poem that was really good...sounded really easy goin just like the point...goin with the flow. nice work and thanx for your comment!
    xxxChristinaxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    keep it up. great job!~~~!

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Short but everything it needs in a good poem! Keep it up! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    soooo good!!! 5/5!! very well-written! hugs