Comments : He never should

  • 15 years ago

    by Amit

    Nice poem, very well written. Keep writing!
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

  • 15 years ago

    by Liam

    brilliant poem, superb style and choice of words, excellent

  • 15 years ago

    by Tiffany Marie

    Hey Robyn. Nice poem, it was really well written. Keep it up!

  • 15 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nicely done!!! Great Job!!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarahbeast

    I love your poem. how did things end up with you guys??

  • 14 years ago

    by robyn

    To sarahbeast we are still together and sticking it out through the hard times, its a very complicated situation that is too long to explain, but maybe it will be in another poem someday

  • 13 years ago

    by PoEtiCmYme

    Dis poem is truly beautiful it's ritely worden and meaning ful . Your talented ur work amazes me. Your words one can get lost in. The picture you paint for the minds eye is wonderful. Taking the reader to another place. dammm dis poem is all dat. so realistic u luv ur guyz dont ya