She lay there

by tictac   Mar 26, 2005


She now lay there trying so hard to hang on but slowly letting go.my tears fall as i walk down the hall only leaving memories for her to see!

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by SSBAL

    very good poem, u have great potential, LIVE UP TO IT!
    luv ya
    jo

  • 18 years ago

    by Zero Cool

    i can see this one took alot of heart into it and that it is very well spoken

  • 19 years ago

    by tictac

    please Rate my poems i work so hard on them