Excellent poem, very well written, and very beautiful lines. Pleasure to read. Keep writing and keep smiling.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

amazing write!

I really love this poem - it's very beautiful!

Philipa

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This was well done except for the typo in the center of the poem it went really good until then I loved the way you wrote it so tightly but the typo left it off a bit good attemp and will hope see more of your work. i have one called set free tell me what you think? Robert

awwww wow really great poem! so many emotions and so many different subjects. really liked it couldnt fault it at all and loved the reaptition!
take care
xxxLoUxxx

nice poem....I gave it a 4/5 because some of the wording was somewhat hard to follow - sentence fluency. Would you please read my poem "Her Confidence"? Your critique would be greatly appreciated.

Christa//No Motiv?

aw that was sweet. 5/5 luv it.

thats sweet, really good 5/5

EXCELLENT, BEAUTIFUL, SWEET AND JUST PERFECT...what more can I say??? Love it, i have to give it 5...

*hugs Sabrina*

So true in every aspect. It is hard to look at the world and go about living everyday. You have a talent. You can take what you see and express it so that everyone else sees it too. Great job.

~*~Christina~*~

oh wow! this was an amazing poem. i loved it! your an excellent writer!