I really enjoyed this poem...And thanks for the comment..yes I did go throught that, but Im a strong girl...and If you dont already know you will learn that strenth is the only thing you need to get throught all the crap...
sorry for all that bull...I promise I wont do it again...Xox Sherrie

s'ok and thanx for commenting an once again im sorry u had 2 go threw that xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Wow! wonderful poem! ur a great writer!...i really luv this poem...its so sad yet so powerful....i worte a poem bout little miss perfect as well...haven't posted it up but i well....when i'm not so lazy lmao! but yes this was a great write, keep up the awesome work! xoxo
~Luvz~
~Chica~
~Luvz~
~Angie~

Very nice...

Aww... such a sad but well written poem, hang in there... and good job, 5/5

Wow this is deep
it was a nicely structured poem, with a unique rhyme scheme

the final stanza was strong and touching
well done

Nice job! I like the repetition in the first line and how it keeps changing. I love the 3rd stanza, and especially love how theres that final TWIST right at the end that just changes how it all seems to go, its quite captivating!

Wow this is such an awsome poem i really enjoyed reading it.. it's quite sad too and powerful. great write thanks for the awsome read :)
love suzy
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OMG! OMG! What an incredible poem... i think that this deserves a rating of at least 10... what... wow! this is incredible work... the rythm, the............ last stanza! OMG what a sad poem, but those are the kinds of poems that i love! in my heart i give you a 100/5, but here i guess i am stuck with giving you a 5/5! INCREDIBLE! 5/5/5/5/5/5/5!

~stevie~
~yellowfeverlime~

Repetition of lines made it a bit cliched like a song-poem of dark origin. As a whole, the rhymes blended well and effortful on structuring. The message was clear though odd, well, fictions make one imagine things beyond reality. Good write, hope its not true account, especially of urs, otherwise, ur not writing anymore, lol.

GR8 POEM.SO POWERFUL YET SAD YET TRUE.IT'S LIKE YOU WROTE MY LIFE STORY