OMG! Loved it. I love to read all of your poems, and this one described how i feel sometimes. I just loved it! Plz keep writing, and comment and vote on mine if you can.
Krista J.

wow...amazing poem!

Thanks All!!!

*tear* She left me a comment on that poem that i wrote for her. and if you see the last poem she wrote, its a suicide note!!! *tear* MEL, I'm soo scared!!!

uuuuhh....holy crap. this is freakin awosme poem. you have a freakin awsome talent Sierra. wow your a great writer. i hope that you are aite tho. keep up your freakin awsome writing ok. Much Love

Nick

r u ok?

i want to be your friend, but i want to know if you still wan to be mine? i dont want to fight for an empty cause. i want to fight for our friendship, and yes sadly your comment brought me down a lil, but thats life, life hurts. there is nothing we can do to stop that but love each other. life is always gonna try to hurt . and it always wins. its gonna hurt. but you have to be strong. you have to let the past be past and remember it not live in it. always stay strong. i have tried to the best of friend to you. with so much i have tried and fought of demons that try to keep me from you but i still fight for you. you have it in you. i know you do. its in you to be a great person. to grow up and be a great mother if you want. you have to learn from this past. to learn from our mistakes or our troubles. i will never let go of you unless you want me to. if you tell me then i will. but honestly, the friend you have become to me, im not sure what i would do if that happened. i have had so much pain in my life.....im use to it. im expecting to hurt. but i hope anyways. i hope for love. i hope our friendship will last. please. dont let me fight for an empty cause. i want you to be my friend. i fo real want you to be my friend, but if you truely want to let go, then i will not hold you back. but i want you to know, i would rather take your tears that hurt, then my own tears that burn my heart. if you let go it is really going to hurt me in more then just friendship. i love you very much. but like i keep saying, i dont want to fight for an empty cause, so please tell me what you would like. i hope that you are ok. just keep your eyes focused on what needs to be done and do it. dont worry about your family, they dont understand you. please dont hurt yourself, if you wanna be friends and cry then cry, if you want to let go , then let go. but whatever you do, dont hurt yourself please. i honestly think i might hurt myself if you do. really. and i dont want to but..........idk what i would do. so if you want to be my friend then i ok, but if you want to let go then i will open my heart and let you go. let me know

Much love

Nick

idk either. We seem to always bicker about our friendship in general, though I don't know how it keeps coming up. Its always a question I guess, but I don't want to answer. I like things the way they are now, that's all I'll say.

You write so well, and you rhyme so beautifully. Keep up the wonderful work!