Standing in the rain (The Girl's POV)

by dReAMeRgRL18   Mar 28, 2005


This is a story of 2 ppl...i got the inspiration from this very sad movie...newayz, this is the girl's POV...u should also read the guy's POV...it's kinda long tho...but hope u like it

My eyes are red
From the tears I've cried
I couldn’t stop the tears
No matter how hard I tried

He broke my heart to pieces
The day he walked away
Nothing that I did or said
Was able to make him stay

He left me standing there
In the cold, freezing rain
But the only thing I felt then
Was the excruciating pain

I continued to stand there
Hoping he would turn around
But he walked further away
It hurt so much I fell to the ground

I asked myself what I did wrong
The reason why he went away
But the answer, I did not know
Until that heartbreaking day

A letter came through the door
Sent from him to me
I stared at it for awhile
Before I opened it to read

My vision became blurry
As tears formed in my eyes
It was his last letter to me
It was his letter of goodbye

I finally knew the reason he left
But it was already too late
He was no longer in this world
He has entered heaven's gate

I didn't even get the chance
To say to him my last goodbye
Why didn't he tell me
Why did he have to hide?

He said he didn't want to hurt me
But that's what hurt me the most
I wanted to be with him till the end
To be there and hold him close

Though he is no longer here
I still have the memories we made
It will stay here in my heart
Where it will never ever fade…

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  • 19 years ago

    by Whittney

    this is one of the best poems i have ever read, although i am very sorry that this happend, everthing will work out, but keep wrighting~whittney