It Became Clear When I Cried

by MzImperfectshun   Mar 29, 2005


It's over
i'm through
i'm done crying over you
it can never be
i know that now
it became clear when i cried

i was making a fool of myself
i felt as if i tripped a long way
but if i did, i got back up
it became clear when i cried

if you easily gave up on me
i will give up on you too
because it's never gonna happen
no matter how much i wanted it too
it became clear when i cried

after i was done crying
i realized i've finally
got the courage to say
i don't need you
i don't want you
so please just go away

it became clear when i cried
except one thing i
still don't understand
if i cried, wouldn't it mean something?

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  • 17 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Good work!!! i loved the way you repeated:
    "it became clear when i cried"
    keep up the writing!!!
    Luv FallenxFromxGrace

  • 19 years ago

    by alexander

    Hey great poem keep on writing you're really good in it 5/5
    Alex

  • 19 years ago

    by MzImperfectshun

    aww thanks very much

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Just because your poems are different doesnt mean that they suck. The rhythm is a bit off but with time you'll figure out how to perfect that. As long as you have the creative knowledge (and you do) and the ability to accept constructive critism, you'll go far in your writing. Nice poem and good luck :)
    -A