great poem! i love it! ya i know andrea and i are being very dark but o well! hehe! really good job though! i can really understand where you're coming from! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

Heather...this is an amazing piece! I loved this line:
"the ones who anticipate my soul
are the lanterns of my fate."
Very interesting!
"Tonight, I lie awake with exploding dreams"
Another great line...overall 5/5~Holly

Excellent poem Heather. I loved the last two verses. Brilliant Heather, Brilliant, awesome piece of writing.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

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I did understand it Heather - only too well so much it actually kind of scared me I thought only I had thoughts like that - a brilliantly written poem to say the least. Amazing use of language and description...and I found there to be so much emotion and so much hidden depth amongst your words darling...FIVE! Luv Eirisa xoxo

awesome poem heather!! your work is just......wow!! keep em' coming =) ~hugs~

-brittnay- ((5/5))

Great poem Heather. Well done with a lot of meaning. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

Great poem Heather. Well done with a lot of meaning. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

We all get it!!! And it sucks!!! The thought Heather...not your poem....lol I love it! Excellent write 5/5

i love it! excellent writing heather!!

i am getting better? wow thanks alot and also the comment
by the way i love your poem even if you were thinking of tommorow it dosent matter cause it was really wonderful

Great poem really nicely written hey since your so good check out mine and see what im doing wrong

Live like there is no tomorow.... A great way to live if you ask me... Great job Heather, keep it up
Aaron