passionate poem keep writing

Very sweet poem! Mary is a lucky girl I hope she knows that! Good Luck and keep writing! Take Care Brooke!

I cannot do anything, but disagree with the above. This poem is built up with the similar rhymes as the other one I read, it is filled with forced rhyme and forced rhytm.

I love your poetry so I think you're wrong.. I voted a 5 for this one..
keep it up.. please check ouy my poem "Eternal Sunshine Of The Spotless Mind" it would mean so much.. hugs

really sweet poem..loved it. it had a nice flow.. keep it up!! :) take care.