An Angels Feelings

by Ian Robert   Mar 29, 2005


Hatred blossoms,
With no fear,
Leaving behind so many tears,
Though out these years,
So many faces,
Have been shattered and wasted,
Petals from a flower,
Left behind to be lost,
Although found,
And savored,
For tomorrow.

A lack of romance,
Kills the night,
Destroying everything insight,
Angels fly from above,
Their delicate white wings,
Shine in the sun,
But as everything seems right,
Its all of the sin,
And all the rest of whats real,
Cause I know I don't feel,
These angels you say,
Protect me from above.

Ian Robert Potapoff

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    Wow, you're writing is much skilled for your age...I'm deeply impressed, just one mistake I caught my dear, an honest one at that...stanza 2, line 3...there should be a space between in and sight ...however, still well done! I'm becoming a fan of your poetry thus far to what I have read!

    Hmm just read the profile though , hmm =( really breaks my heart, I'm praying for you to get through and if you need a lil support, feel free to email me ReticentSoul@aol.com , I'm willing to listen if you need it!

    Keep yourself alive, your poetry brings new essence to the world =)

    Love Heather
    ps 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Daniel Fink

    Great poem really nicely written hey since your so good check out mine and see what im doing wrong

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