Today

by Amanda   Mar 29, 2005


I went out today and i met a man,
he said hi do you like my van,
I replied yes it is very nice,
he said thanks for the advice,

I went home and put on a DVD,
thinking of the man on the settee,
I thought stupid girl go back out,
i liked that man without a doubt,

So i jumped up, turned off the TV,
got myself right up off the settee,
I went back out and he was there,
looking at me with a friendly stare,

Our lips moved closer i lost my power,
fell for a man I've known for an hour,
Something sparked, don't know what,
was like a great dream but it's not,

He walked me home, right to my door,
see you tomorrow, i fell to the floor,
he bent down and picked me a rose,
is this true love, i guess, who knows......

Copyright 2005 - Amanda Linzi

Just wrote this cos i was in a romantic kind of mood. Please comment would be great. Thanks.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Sweet writing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Loved it! Great job:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert

    Never met a woman that aggressive in a sexual manner but it was intresting to think you a girl would feel the same way i wrote one called another beer please it is a great contrast you this one tell me what you think.

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    Excellent write, Amanda. Enjoyed reading it~
    5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit