Thoughts in the Rain

by Mollie   Mar 30, 2005


She’s sitting dazedly
Faced pressed to the window
As the rain danced
Causing a ripple in the shadows,

Blinking at street lights
That pass like strobe lights,
She thinks of the day
And this rainy night,

Puddles splintered of God’s teardrops
Filling as time goes by
It sounds of distant muskets
And washes us away when we die,

This rain of which she wishes apone
If it not be, no sorrow to be had
And no rejoice for the sun
No good can become when there be no bad.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mollie

    theres no real story behind it, i was coming home from a consert on the bus one night and it was raining and i just let my thoughts run loose and those where some of the things that went through my head, it was sposed to be a poem to just let ur mind run on but with a hint of mixed feelings a have about some stuff going on like wars and stuff and what the big guy upstairs thinks bout it lol but then again u can't know happiness until u know sorrow i guess is kinda what the poems saying...i donno it says alot of different things to tell ya the truth. but thanks for the coment
    ~the writer

  • 19 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    im curious, whats the story behind this poem? what made you write it?? i liked it. speciall this part:No good can become when there be no bad.
    i enjoyed it. very interesting.