this poem is really good and i can really relate to it i liked it it showed alot of feelings and truths well i'm here if u need to talk check some of my poems out plz luv jess

I'll take your hand and show you a brighter day, cause you are such a special and person to me, I care!!! hope that you are ok sweet Amanda, please talk to me!!! I'm here for you....and hmm don't drink more lol =0)

Love always Sabrina

Ohhh, love your poem as always, they really speaks to my heart!!!

Thanks all. I'll be ok, just gonna get some rest and everything will be fine i hope! :)

this poem kinda really reached out...
hope ur ok ..keep ur head up..

great poem !!

take care

Hey your poem was good....Keep your chin up and it'll all be good!

Lisa

Dang!!! Girl, this is an excellent write.
This poem reads real smooth and is beautifully written, excellent job
Great rhyme and flow, considering how
you were feeling when you wrote it.
“This isn't very good” NOT
I hope you are feeling better, think of it
as a bad hair day. Wash it off cut it off
sweep it up toss it out, or just put on a
hat and go out and play it will be ok. lol
I hope maybe your are smiling now. ( ;

I think it is a well written poem about a common feelings of loneliness

This is not among your best poems, I think, but it is still quite good. Quite good flow, and most of the rhymes seem "natural". I'll check out a few others...You could maybe have spent more time on this poem

Well i was in a bad mood and absolutely drunk when i wrote it! LOL!

hey! I saw your comment... and i'm sitting in keyboarding class and i thought i'd catch up on your poems... i love this one... it's pretty good... i hope you're feeling better:)

Amanda, Hope things are O.K. now, beautiful job on this one also. Your poems are always a pleasure to read. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

that one was great, just like your others

the flow was alot better and the way you portraid it was really well done. I wrote in the first person in a poem called Owl or the owl tell me what you think take care

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

I love the poem its awesome......
I can relate to here

I was upset this morning, thought I'd have a drink,
to take all the pain away, but now i cannot think,
I was thinking stupid thoughts and feeling so alone,
thinking of how i could get through it on my own,

I feel so unappreciated when i only ever do so good,
no one seems to respect me, even though they should,

it makes me think of how i feel after i smoke or drink. awesome poems. and if ya want could u check out some of mine. plz thanks awesome job

I see you have a good ablility to convey evry emotion and thought well. I read about 4 poems today and you are gifted in that area, alot of people have problems but you do very well. I like that about your work I can feel. Well good job will try to read more later ok...