Soon I'll Be Nothing

by Carlee Ann   Mar 30, 2005


I can't get you to notice me
Although I'm waving my hand in front of your face
You stare blankly ahead
It's as if I've vanished without a trace

We used to be so close
We've never been so far apart
I thought we'd never get this way
I thought that from the start

But now you just ignore me
Except for the occasional hello
This is simply unbearable
From here where do I go?

It's like I'm reaching out
But you can't feel my touch
I don't know what has happened
I've never hurt so much

Remember when we were good friends?
You could always make me smile
But now I'm close to nothing
I haven't laughed in a while

I always felt like I was special to you
Like you'd never let me fall away
But now it's starting to happen
And I don't know what to say

I shout, but you don't hear
I'm like an invisible wall
I'm fading slowly from your heart
Soon I'll be nothing at all.

*Car*

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  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    OH, that is one sad poem...

    IT is alltogether written in a quite simple way, but still kept me interested...very good!

    The rhyming scheme and the flow works out just fine...

    Great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    ty. Tina!
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    hey great poem... i liked it 5/5 keep it up!
    Much love ~ Tina

  • 19 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    ty all!
    Car

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma B

    I can really relate to this poem, I think it's awesome! You keep writing like this Car
    -emma-