Nicely Written

wow this is an awesome poem!! i love it! 5/5!! keep it up!

*jenny*

Oh, thank you all.

Read it. Loved it.

Bravo!!! so unique..so different so awsome!

thats sooooo good... thx for the comments on my poems

that is a really good interesting poem... very different i really like it good job

I loved it!! It has a great flow to it and the words seem to fit perfectly... Def. one of my favorite poems... take care and keep your head up xx:

*> : PainOfOne

another great poem 5/5

wow :o
i dont know what to say.............
wow :o

A common subject to write about, nontheless it proved to be an interesting read. I can feel the pain through the words you have used.

Keep Writing
Nici

Wow another amazing poem from you. Very unique loved it! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Brooke~

Keep up the good work!

OMG That was so awesome I liked the repetition idea. very creative and gripping. excellent job! xxx

Oh my god, I love this poem, I love the way you have intertwined the two ways of showing emotion. Amazing...I wish I could write like this

Excellent write. I love it!

-Tiff

this was beautiful, stunning, you are truly gifted
~Freak~

you don't need to do that if you need to talk you can e-mail me nice powerful poem though