The War in Iraq

by Mike   Mar 31, 2005


All you hear on the news is war,
and which is something that cannot be ignored,
because of the dying and more,
here we are,
listening and hearing,
to all the hardcore drama which we never heard before,
so as we sit or lay on the floor,
watching whats going on,
you scream and yell not wanting this anymore.

So as people die,
and as people cry,
were lying here,
alone.. asking why..,
and why the soldiers die,
without any reply,
on saying good-bye,
and as there wifes or husbands dies,
family;s are torn from behind,
without nothing but their pride.

So as theres blinding pain,
which contains,
fear and anger they cannot explain,
they sit there once again,
putting there hand out and praying,
praying for once for no more pain,
no more delay,
which would bring the soldiers,
here back again,
where they once remained.

as the surrounding,
is found to be a battle ground,
the only thing around,
is dead bodies that are abound,
and as the sound,
of killing is profound.

So as the troops pride,
is still strong and haven;t died,
the honor and how they survive,
and to make the world better worldwide,
is still proven and they will provide.

what the soldiers are trying to gain,
is to explain, and make the world better again,
so as they give us all there pain,
for us to remain,
a better country and not the wrong lane,
so they do so for fighting to pain,

so as they fight,
and with all there might,
for the country,
they know they will be alright,
and as one day the world will ignite,
to the defeat of the evil in sight.

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This was made a couple of months ago by me, and not as rhyming as my others but its still a present problem

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  • 18 years ago

    by wendy

    Great job we are all praying for ore men and women to have a safe trip home soon

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    Very nice. You Have a great talent. keep up the good work. 5/5. take a look at mine some time if youd like.

    ~David~

  • 19 years ago

    by Aubrey

    aww that was really good! nice flow to it!
    check mine out sometime!! keep up the fantastic work! <3

    xoxo
    Aubs