i understand this poemso well it is amazing! 5/5

this is a really beautiful poem. its so deep, it's just...undescribable. 5/5

first off you did a great job and i loved reading your poem cause it relates to alot of people even me. 2nd off you better keep writing cause this was good keep your poems posted i wanna read more.5/5 take a look at mine if you would like.

~David~

Thank you David, yea ill have a look at yours xXx

i loved it!! it as excellent!! good job on writing it!! im adding you to my favorites...♥ Joann

Thanku Joann :) xXx

*wow* I really like this poem 5/5. I think this is my favorite of yours so far, but I haven't read them all yet. Keep it up.

True feelings great poem

Wow!?!

This is great man!

Such feelings put into this one!?

The flow was great!?

Well done

xxlove uxx

great poem,I'm in a hurry now and do not have the time to write much more..

I look in the mirror
And what do I see
This empty blank face
Staring at me

Tear-stained and broken
Those blue eyes turn black
My vision is blurred
My sight starts to crack

Truly a captivating start

Wow...Kim that was wonderful. It flowed perfectly and truly did portray the pain this person was feeling. So many I'm sure could relate to this as many live the same way...hiding all that's REALLY them. This is sad...

I will admitt I was a bit confused in the middle when you just through someone in there...
"You put up with my moods
And still nothing you say
Theres no chance in telling
How long you will stay

Ive tried to keep myself but
I'm losing who I used to be
I'm trying to keep that bit inside
This mask is becoming me"
That threw me off a bit as during the rest of the poem you weren't talking about anyone. You went from looking in the mirror to talking to someone. I love the last line in the part about the mast BECOMING you.

Very nicely done though...I really liked this!! ;)

*blinks*

Amazing.

Lv A, x

Amazing!!!! :)

Great work on this one girl :) i really enjoyed reading this poem and like most people today...i relate to it a little too well :)