Ohhh my god. Everyone needs to read this. This is so deep, ive seriously never heard a better poem in my whole life. I just started to shiver when i was reading it and i still am. Im sorry about what happened. If you would like you could take a look at a few of my poems, anyways you did a PERFECT job on this poem your now on my favorites that was just amazing! I'd like to get to know you more email me sometime or im me im WinksSpecial on aim. Man your good. Luv Ya Lots.

~David~

Ohhh my god. Everyone needs to read this. This is so deep, ive seriously never heard a better poem in my whole life. I just started to shiver when i was reading it and i still am. Im sorry about what happened. If you would like you could take a look at a few of my poems, anyways you did a PERFECT job on this poem your now on my favorites that was just amazing! I'd like to get to know you more email me sometime or im me im WinksSpecial on aim. Man your good. Luv Ya Lots.

~David~

Huny absolutly fab poem! It really touched me, Its SO 'real'. I hope your ok, sorry for everything you;ve been through. Take care

xX MAZ Xx

AMAZING! BEAUTIFUL! you are so talented! I'm so sorry you have had to go through all of that.
xxxxxxx

wow, that was really good and so sad... It sounds like that really came from deep inside of you and it well thought out..
very good poem... 5/5
check out mine sometime as well:-D

So sorry you have been through this, we are always here.... my email is italktomuchandimproud@hotmail.com if you ever want to talk, very well done

OMG! I'm sorry you had to go through dat. It's so sad. I liked your poem, you have great talent. Hang in there. Keep up the good work! 5/5 Keep ur head up!

Wow. That was a really strong poem. Awful what that boy done to you, hope you're ok. Cat xXx

Lucy, I read this poem awhile ago and thought it was wonderful, I just never had the time to compliment you on it. Thank you for the comments on my poems, they mean a lot to me. Keep your chin up, hun.

Megan

thank you heaps, that means heaps to me!!!!

This was a really powerful poem, It's so deep...
It must have taken heaps for you to bare your soul like that...
We are all here for you if you need someone..

ps thankx for the comment

x0x0 robyn

Powerful poem 5/5

thanks

wow that was amazeing so well written i loved it but i have to go now i will read more tomorrow i promise comment me back tomorrow so i remember but so far you seem really talented! awsome work byebyes >>5/5<< bec

Oh my god, girl, I'm so sorry! You do know that that isn't all your good for, right? We love you, and you're an awesome poet!!!

wow...very deep and moving piece. absolutely beautifully written. keep up the great work!
-xXx-

OMG!!!!...wat a really sad sad poem!!! But it's really good!!!!!

Oh god, thats another such powerful poem. It's so horrible and sad.. makes me so mad that there are such monsters in this world.
I hope someone didnt really laugh at this, its such a awful thing to have happened. Hope you can stay strong, and be happy.

Love Katie x

awesome poem. a lot of emotion and feelings. good job. 5/5

wow great poem, very impressed.