it reads...The Fear Inside Tears Me Apart...

wow that is really awesome..the whole letter down the side thing...i love it!! great poem~ keep it up excellent job 5/5~ i'd type more but i gotta run~
ttyl~ take care~
*Brittany*

Great job, Andrea. Stay strong and always keep a clear mine. hugs, lots of love, *Ann*

Such an strong poem. You are such a beautiful writer, have you ever put you work in competitons? If not, you should. This poem touched me and I can relate to you so much.. the pain of life is too much to handle at times.
Keep the Faith
Peace Out

I loved how you put that secret message in there! nice work hun! -5

Love you
Heather

You should so go into competitions. Im serious, you are an excellent writer and you shouldn't keep it to yourself.
Keep the Faith
Peace Out

Go to the top of the page and enter the "contests" site... even if you dont win, you are still one of my favourite writers
Keep the Faith
Peace Out

aw man that just hurt my heart when i read that, i hope its not true. I hope your ok? keep up this amazing writing. its just simply great. the way you put the words together can easily be described as perfect, nothing less. Keep up the great work. Hope you ok. Much Luv Always

Nick

p.s your email address didnt work, sorry.

absolutly AWSOME
love you hunnie

I love your poems and I would hate to see you not using your talent!! Dont ever think that ur not good enough cause you'll never know if you don't try
Keep the faith
Peace Out

This is amazing, you really know how to use words, you're really good at writing... wow... 5/5
Always, Danielle

very cool, well writen poem. i like how you did read the first letter of each line, i did a poem like this once but i don't think i ever posted it. sorry i didn't read this sooner i been busy i'm gonna b on spring break so i should be able to come and read more after that.

PLP ~lil slam~ lots of hugs and love

Andrea!!! This was amazing! I still don't know how anyone can write something as wonderful as this!!! What i have always felt that i lacked in my poems was great imagery... but you have that oozing out of all your poems, especially this one! Keep it up!!

Im sorry...im just so sorry.
you cant even write about love, happiness or joy because of all these demons keep ahold of you and im so sorry i cant help you.It kills me knowing that you are going through situations i dont know of and they are causing you harm for just you being you . it brings tears to my eyes because the reason i think you are such a great friend is because your such a wonderful person with amazing talent and you should be praised for that....not hurt.

-awesome peice of work

love you girl, stay strong
take care,
-Allen

Wow, that was just- it blew me away, seriously. I forget what that's called when you use a sentence vertically to make the rest of the poem. I really loved that idea to post on here, i havent seen anyone else use it, and if they did certainly not come to the quality you reached in this poem. So great!!
Much love,
-A

Very nicely written I loved how you put the secret message in there also.. Keep your head up (always) xx:

*> : PainOfOne

wow...beautifully written. stay strong and take care,
Ariane
-xXx-

Amazing poem its a really good write thanks for the comment!

take care

WOAH. i am simply blown away andrea, this poem is such an amazing poem and i think that it is one of the most amazing ones. I have got to add you to my favorites...i don't know if i got you there or not.

But if you ever want to IM me i have MSN and AIM

MSN: Lacrossefanforlife at hotmail dot com

Aim S/N: Dark C Savior

Five/Five

P.S. thanks for your comments on my poem. i appreciate them.

Your poems was awesome!!! Keep up the good work!!

Thanks for your comment, it put me to tears. I just got out of the hospital yesterday and I'm feeling so great. I found what I have need for so long, God. I gave my life to Him and I can't believe I did cause He was the one I blamed for my pain. Man I feel like I can conquer the world and I am gonna be the PM for Australia!! There are so many awesome experience I have felt by just accpeting Him into my heart. If you wanna know anything about it just send me an e-mail. My e-mail is slic_chic11@hotmail.com. I swear by Him, there is no way that I would be here right now without Him!! I love you so much *tear* Thank-you so much!!!

Keep the Faith
Peace Out

P.s have you entered any competitions yet?