Would You Notice?

by Rachel   Apr 3, 2005


The scars on my wrist.
Do you notice?
This plastic smile upon my face.
Do you notice it?
These tears that I've cried for so long.
Have you noticed?
The blood on my hands?
Do you notice?
Do you even look twice?
If I pulled the trigger,
Would you notice?

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  • 20 years ago

    by black keys

    gReAt JoB grl this is awesome! 5/5 great style and title n everything, just remember, "no one is worth your tears, and the one's tht r, won't make u cry..." AwSoMeX

  • 20 years ago

    by †Cemetary†Whisper†

    Excellent poem...It's exactly how I feel...5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by Rocky

    hey i like this one the best, its so true would the loved ones notice if we were really gone. Keep expressing yourself you on my add favorties now

  • 20 years ago

    by ~Da1NOnliiNaNa~

    hey nice poem...it is good
    5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by Rachel

    Thanks everyone, I didn't think that it was that good.

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