by Krystin Apr 3, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
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You are my angel |
by Brookeღ
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Very well done! Exellent flow! You could feel the love you feel in this poem. You can't help who you fall in love with. Parents always think the person is the wrong one! It's to bad things didn't work out! Great work! 5/5 Take Care! Brooke~ |
by angelposer
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Hey again!! Another good poem!!! Parents just don't understand sometimes. It sucks. I'm glad you are happy though! How old is this guy anyway? |
by cac123
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This is so sad.. your poem sends a beatiful message that many can relate to, it kind of reminds me of a Romeo Juliet thing. |
by StormySkies
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Good Like it, very creative keep writing! |
by shannon
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amazing.. i loved it! a 5/5 |