Shes lying.

by Krystin   Apr 4, 2005


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Inside shes dying
outside shes crying
her mother, now sighing
for these lies she ain't buying
all the sh!t shes denying
but really, shes trying
look at her... shes surviving
"I'm OK" shes lying

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  • 19 years ago

    by xxangelchicxx2000

    a very to the point poe. keep it up 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Unloved ♥

    yes I agree short, but I'm still lovin it..ha..your a great writer never stop..nice poem

    Unloved ♥

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    ~*~oh wow, exactly like me and my mum and friends and boyfriend and shit..good job!!!!~*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Krystin

    Hey thanx! i think thats a great idea! ill try some different lines when i get around to it! thanx again!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lil Luce

    wow really good flow to it the only think that lets it down is the surviving cos its only a lahf rhyme maybe u could use...prying,implying, underlying, with a differnt sentence...just some suggestions....take care and well done and thanks for ur comment...
    xxxLoUxxx

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