My love is Gone

by RetiCent   Apr 5, 2005



For one brief moment in my life
I had you in my arms.
Holding you in my arms,
I felt I had the world.

I knew it was real,
I could see your beautiful hair,
I could smell your sweet scent,
I could hear your enchanting voice ringing in my head.

I thought it would last forever,
Only to realize that we wouldn’t last.
I never realized how much you meant
until I lost you for good.

You changed my life when you left.
I felt my life slowly slipping,
I didn’t know what to do now that you were gone.
What else was left, without you

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hey
    Good poem, but a suggestion? -dont hurt me please im not trying to be mean- Maybe forcus on the love lost rather then act of losing it you know? like, when writing, emotion is better then situation? I hope it makes sense and helps=s

    its a good poem!
    Jenn

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