sooo good! I voted a 5! keep up the awsome work.. please check out my poem "my dad: dead and gone forever" please comment/vote it would mean a lot ot me... thanks

Such a really sad poem! Another amazing poem! Very well written 5/5 Take Care! Brooke

I have a new one Set Free would love ur opinion! Thanx I appreciate it!

wow that was a great poem, its amazing how u can put something so great in such a small amount of words, great job, i loved it!!!

Beautifully done, u have talent that some people can only hope to mimic with flashy words!

Amazing work. Keep your head up and keep on writing! My favourites are full but Im adding you to my favourites list in internet explorer. Hold strong doll. 5/5
-xx-

this is really good! kepp up the good work? could u please tell me what u think about

you made me want to live

Excellent poem! I really liked it! 5.0 Mayb u cud check out my poemz one day! Thanx ♥

such a good poem simple and meaningful!!! your in my favourites!!!

That was short but was a great read you did a great job on this one leep it up...

wow....I don't know what to say its so great! once again youve writen another amazing poem. great job!!

that was even better than the last one! Not much more to say but exellent!!!

I liked how it seemed one thing, then you changed it at the end.

OMG! That's morbid! Very nicely done though! That was very intense. At first I was going to say it needed more as I started reading it I got all into but by the time I got to the end I was ok with how you ended. This flowed nicely........very nice write!!

excellent 5/5 !!

Woah, very nice, i think a comma in the last line would be good, but its a great poem

Wow, you are turly amazin gi never read a poem like this and i love your style you flow once again is amazing. 5.5

Nice flow and you could almost picture this in your head. I liked this one the best

Wow.. this is fantabulous!! tho its a lil sad..gr8 job.. the rhyme and the flow were perfect.. ur reli talented.. i cud reli see wat was happening.. i reli lyk the last two lines..
keep up the talent
take care
Nouna

This was excellent.i could almost feel the pain.very sad indeed.

But in reality she’s soaring down
Further, faster, she hits the ground
People all gather but its too late
Her dreamful world her sorrowful fate

this stanza was excellent.
keep up the good work.
best wishes
and take care