Wow!!! Enticing words for one to write their life,
and then “Let me introduce you,
To the darkest of them all. Let me bring you up-
Then let you fall”
The message I got is like the war for good and evil,
and if not or is, it is an excellent write well done.

Amazing piece and the ending was phenominal...5...you're such a talent sweetheart =D

Love
Heather

this poem really does take me somewhere with its fantasy imagery great work i nedd to stick to commenting on poem and out of the discussion forum lol take care 5

Powerful, Kaitlin. Powerful, romantic, and more than a little metaphysical. Great poem with a wonderful ending.