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hey, maybe you're right, maybe you're not. Who know's, the perfect, or atleast almost perfect father may apear some day

heyy nice write i'm liking it:)

thats a great poem nice use of words luv sam xox

hey this is a realli good poem...it was realli good..sad tho..hope ur ok!
i no wat its like not 2 have a father...its hard but when its been like it for so long u get use 2 it..but it hurts 2 think that u can neva b 'daddys lil gurl' dnt worry hun..keep strong
luv always shell xoxo

Oh my gosh that is sad! Well so many people have to deal with this same issue. I did....and it sucked....you get over it...Really...Very nice write....Hope everything works out for the best... Take Care

powerful poem.... i know how it is living with out a dad.... my dad passed away few years ago... and it drove me insane... since im the only child... but i told my self, no matter how hard it is, i know i'll live... =) and i know u'll live and grow up perfectly... =)

hope u pass by mine.... votes and comments much appreciated...
much love...
***letishia***