Nobody notices

by alyssa   Apr 6, 2005


*** I am going to tell you right now that reading this poem will be a waist of time. It sucks just like the rest of mine ***

I’m sitting here in the back of my classroom crying and bleeding
Nobody notices
I’m trying to let some of my pain go by writing this poem
But its not working
Each second that passes feels like an hour
And as time goes by my pain grows worse
I can’t take it any more
I can’t handle the all the pain
So I hide behind my books and silently cry
Again no one notices
But its ok because soon ill be dead.
And I know nobody will notice

***Since you did read it please comment***
*******Thank you*******

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Lmay

    Some one will always notice, you have a great writing style, and i love the passion in all of your poems.
    L x

  • 19 years ago

    by RapMastaT

    Neva giv up,I kno I nearly did,I regretted it,I lived for other people,not myself,Hold on dude,coz it'll b all sweet wen ur da 1 earning $$$ 4 such a gr8 poem.:)Respect.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lyss is dead

    wow I lvoe this poem. It's kinda ironic cause my name is alyssa too and I am also 14..lol. And I am also a cutter, and no one nitices. I guess I don't want them to though. I do them in places no one would ever see. I am curretly in a PHP program (partial hopital program) aka mental hospital, and i havnen't been in school for 3 weeks so far. my life s u cks so if you ever wanna talk my AIM sn in omglyssison. hope to hear from u soon

    lyss

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    great poem! i love it! this is really sad and i hope you know that i would notice and i would be so sad! keep it up though!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by alyssa

    Really good poem I love it and I can def. Relate. If you get a min check out my new poem called Nobody Notices. Ill ttul
    Alyssa

Read All Comments (7)

More Poems By alyssa