She Could Not Take No More

She could not take no more
Of this pain and hate rid
Her body was sore
And her heart was broken

She was the quiet type
Didn't have many friends
Until she met this boy one night
He was all she had hoped for

This boy was her world
And they soon fell in love
She was only happy when she held
Him in her arms

He was her only release from all the pain
And shouting at home
He was the only thing that kept her sain
Until this one day

Her mother had to find out about her secret love
Her mum was furious
Her mother beat, and talking more than a shove
She left this girl bruised all over

She was banned from seeing her boyfriend
She had to make excuses why she couldn't see him - she was afraid
But then it all came to an end
As he lost his faith in her

She was so upset
When she got home that night
She searched all night on the net
Of ways end this hell hole

So on that Friday morning
She didn't go to school
Instead she put an end to all her mourning
And took out the knife

She walked down to the river
And took the knife out
And before she could diver
She was bleeding to death

And on her watery deathbed
With tears rolling down her face
The lasts words her said
Were I will die for you

I know its really rubbish, but please leave a comment to tell me how I could improve please. I hope to write some more like this soon!!! Thanks!!