Comments : Lets take a walk

  • 18 years ago

    by David Paul

    I really like it. Since I know you I can see how this goes with your personality. Hope things get better.

  • 18 years ago

    by KiKi

    great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ciera

    hey Robert! This was probably my favorite poem too! But I like all your poems! ttyl! Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I think I'm going to have to say it: awww...

    Another great one...the rhyming, the phrasing, the emotion. Sweet ;)

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    GREAT!!! wow.. I really like this poem... Please check out my poem "I’m Not Like Other Daughters...I Cut Myself" it would mean so much to me.. hugs to you!

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    very good poem Robert

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Madison Meeks♥

    very good and very well put.i liked that poem.it was REALLY good.keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Star MB

    Your poem was amazing I really liked it! I can relate to that so well keep up the great work!! Please check out some of my poems and let me know what you think. bye for now! :O)

  • 18 years ago

    by Becca

    Loved it such a great poem, :) 5/5
    goth xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Very cute poem. Most guys dont think a walk is enough, but its so nice to see someone who appreciates the little special moments in life such as a walk. Great ideas, keep writing!

    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Thats was really good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristie

    Again i say wow

  • 18 years ago

    by InDePeNdEnT AnD BeAuTiFuL

    That was awesome...i love ur poem!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    If you ask me...i definitely will say yes...so i don't think anyone will say no to you...

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    Great poem =]