Fade

by Nikki   Apr 7, 2005


Death before my very eyes
and i feel i must give in
its calling out my name
oh what a sweet release
to breathe my final breath
and the leave the world in which i've fallen.
Cause i don't belong here
and im grasping for my last breath.

not very good but i tried

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  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Very powerful for such a short poem. That's what I really like about it. Good work. =]

    Thanks for the comment by the way.

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Don't rush into death, you might regret it:)
    Thx for your comments and I'm glad you liked my poems.
    Stay strong *hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

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