Dreams

by OnlySoStrong   Apr 8, 2005


I walk in....
Your standing there,
Scared and shocked
I stand and stare
Your arms are dripping
In your own blood
It falls to the floor
In a puddle like mud
You have a knife up to your neck
You slit your throat
My life your wreck
I wake up cold
In my tears and sweat
This is one dream I'll never forget.

Hey,
I wrote this poem about when I had a dream about my boyfriend slitting his neck and killing himself. It was really scaring so when I woke up I decided to write about it. Please tell me what you think.....
Thanks

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley

    I can see that you really love him because if you woke up in tears...just yea, i just met this guy and i would totally feel the same way because i love him with all my heart. its a very good poem even tho it is short and stuff. but hey thanks and peaces.

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