i really enjoyed it had a really strong message and flows really well. def adding you to my favourites! 5/5 well done!
tace kare
xxxLoUxxx

Very nice poem, I especially liked the repetition of the first verse. It really reinforces the words. Beat was flawless, deffinitely reading more of your work.

Take care of yourself.
All my love,
Laura.

Wow i loved it, really flowed and good to read, well done :D

gr8 poem..even gr8er message.. love the way u put it al 2gether. keep up the talent
take care
nouna

"i hope you guys think this is good, cause i'm not so sure. it's just a bunch of thoughts that came to me all of a sudden. hope you enjoy it!"

The poems that come from thoughts suddenly flowing out onto the paper...those are some of the best ones. Don't worry, I enjoyed it.

xxx
 

shame on any one who gave this less then a five. this was fantastic. its like omg...all ur poems so far have touched me in a way that no other poem, except mine, have touched me. And to ur little comment, this is more then just THOUGHTS this is true emotion.

watching the night
pass her by
she begins to leave
and slowly die

that is my favorite line.

i also wanted to tell u that i love ur technique. Some of ur poems, i've read, seem to have no rhyme. But they flow soooo beautifully! i never thought that was possible! but with poetry...anythings possible and u have proved the inevitable.

that was amazing! i loved it. very well written. it flows really well. great job.
crystal

wow i really liked this one...a lot better then the other one....it flows really well....5/5 great job luv yas mwah

-kayla-

Wow well i loved your thoughts then lol. Great Job with this one. Absolutly wonderful.. it all went together so perfectly and the rhyme scheme was jus awesome! great grand job lol.

Good flolwing I like your writing keep it up

I really love your work, this one espically