Tremble...

by cac123   Apr 8, 2005


**this had a kind of rythym like a beat i guess.. so if you get confused thats why.**

Tremble,
heart pounds within,
Fear,
my head does spin,
Cringe,
at the touch of love,
Burn,
the heavens above,
Fly,
cover grounds unreachable,
Discover,
all thoughts unteachable,
Pain,
experience it to the bone,
Standout,
and you'll be truly alone,
Faith,
turned inside out,
Scream,
at a whispers doubt,
Stare,
at the body unkept,
Cry,
because nothings left,
Love,
the ones left in the dark,
Cleanse,
all the scars on your heart,
Trust,
the path you are given,
Laugh,
at the world that we live in,
Guilt,
spreads a sickness inside,
Truth,
we all have something to hide,
Lust,
Devil horns on an angel,
Sun,
a fools deceit after rain fell,
Hope,
broken innocence will mend,
Hate,
the love that angels don't send,
Give up,
don't even try,
Perish,
when all love dies.

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  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    i really like the way you wrote this one. it flows so well. i'm thinking of adding you to my favorites.
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    i really like the way you wrote this one. great job! i'm thinking of adding you to my favorites. keep it up!
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    i really like the way you wrote this one. great job! i'm thinking of adding you to my favorites. keep it up!
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    i guess i read it 5 or 6 times before i found a good pace to read it but when you find that it really flows. great job and keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    wow, this really caught my eye! i absolutely loved the lines about devil's horns on an angel and that hate is the love that angel's don't send! very creative! keep it up!