this is very good heather! it's me by the way brittany!! i got this new name thingy cuz i couldn't stand not being on this site, so i'm back!! great job and always htough, missed you!! lol love ya tatlk to ya later~ take care~
*Brittany*

Oh, Heather! Im so sorry for what your father puts you through! Its not right! The poem is full of such raw emotion! Just keep your head up and don't let anyone get you down! Keep it up~Holly

Good work hun :) Stay strong, luv u muches,
xx

i know how you feel its sad i can relate to you and that sucks

Really good! Very emotional!
xxxxxxx

poem rockz butter! dads can b rude, but remember that some1 luvs u

Well Those Must Have Been Tears Of Talent That Was a Joy Reading xoxox-Nikki-xoxo

Very well done, this one. Awesome poem. I am impressed with this one.
5/5. Take Care, Always Believe in Love, Amit

great poem, sad situation, sorry about it. it must have been rough. hope your doing better!

~PLP~ Lil slam~ keep your chin up

Hey there Heather,
I know your father does love you very much! He may not show it but he truely does. I am sorry he may not show it to you, but deep down inside he loves you more than anything in the world! Dont be to hard on urself, you didn't do a single thing wrong. He just has to learn how to love. Thats all! Just remind him everyday how much he means to you and how you love him so much. That should make him see his mistakes! Great poem!!!

♥ Always,
Carrie

hey, that totally sux. fathers should not treat you like that. i can really feel the emotion, esp in the first stanza. def like it, even though it is from a not so kewl experience.

hey, that was a really good poem, its tyms like these im glad i dnt have a dad, im feel so sorry for you, keep writting and take care

xXxLoVe FrOm CoDeYxXx

oh hunz that was sooo sad :'( ..... im sorry abt that
it was a gr8 poem
and hey im here for u if u need to talk ok :)
love ya hunz take caree
always smile
peaceee

thats so mean of him, good on u writing a poem about it luv sam xox