5/5 hun, I really want to party with you! LOL You are extremely talented, keep up the awesome work!

XOXO

O.O Wow...awesome!!! I love ittt...please continue with a second part :) this is amazing <33 i love ittttttttt xxxx great write

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

This was so good! Excellent work. Keep it up! Xxx Mia

very good, very intense.......keep it up.

5/5

Jesse

whoa and wow
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wow that was interesting, keep em coming, check me out.

Wow can't wait for part two...keep it up!

Great part 1...you should def. write a second part to this. I know it would be great! Keep it up.

alwayz,
*flowing tears*

OH WOW! =] Yesh write part 2 now ^^

WOW! That's amazing! You have to write a part 2!

Wonderful job, erotic excellence, bravo!!! Kaitlin a superlative erotic write, sensual, seductive, sumptuous, and sexy, absolutely splendid and a most superb write. In my astute opinion of the erotic format magnificient!!!

Kaitlin, again, that was a great poem. If you are an avid erotic writer check this out. Here's an editorial on erotic writing, focusing on the hallmarks (keys) of good erotic writing titled, Erotic Writing 101;

http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/explicit/poems.php?id=140806

Kaitlin, if you have any thing to add to the editorial information, anything that you feel would add to the discussion, as to what makes good erotica, makes for a good erotic poem, feel free.

Amaze.
hott.
very hott.